Stuck Kitty

We've been working hard on our descriptive writing in class using a picture with an animal theme - have a read of what some of us wrote ...

(J.L.)  The ginger kitten quietly crept towards the glass tank.  The shiny fish were so scared that they hid in the corner of their tank with the bubbly bubbles above them.  She hungrily climbed up the tree and pounced in the slippery tank.  The soggy kitten's drippy body was soaking wet.  The sad goldfish were very frightened.  Then the stuck kitten heard a creaking sound and it was the door and her owner to the rescue - Phew!

(H.M.)  The little kitten was watching the fish.  He was hungry so he put his paw in the fish tank, but  he fell in.  He got so scared and cold.  He was stuck in the fish tank and no matter how much he tried he couldn't get out.  He was mad and unhappy.  Then his owner came and got him out and he never went in that tank again.

(C.M)  The ginger cat was creeping sneakily up on the beautiful goldfish.  He was carefully staring at the goldfish and he dived into the tank where they live.  The cat was afraid of water but he jumped in anyway.  He looks like a squirrel in the tank.  The cat screamed until the owner came in and saw their cat in the fish tank.  He was trying to eat the fish - naughty and mischievous cat.